Ardi hon that was very nice indeed, please do more.
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| Somthing I alwasys had fun with, so starting a thread for Poems. http://gspdancers.org/forums/viewtopic.php?f=1&t=822 |
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| Author: | Jugsmalone [ Fri Dec 05, 2008 5:11 am ] |
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Ardi hon that was very nice indeed, please do more.
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| Author: | Jugsmalone [ Fri Dec 05, 2008 5:24 am ] |
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Demons: Were you unwanted Were you unloved Was it lack of money Was it lack of faith Were you to Fat or Maybe too thin The demons come to you they won't let you Win They come in a bottle They come in the powder they come in the needle you shoot into your arm You may Lie, You may Cheat The demons you try and try to Beat So you judge me, on my size By those dark circles under my eyes You snicker you laugh and you stare You have no idea of My demons Nor do you care I am weak, I think I can not win The Demons they haunt me from within You can not help me, tho you may try I will somehow alway have an alibi Theese Demons are mine, and maybe in time, just a little more time I will see how to slay theese Demons of Mine |
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| Author: | Prymalrage [ Fri Dec 05, 2008 7:42 am ] |
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Beautifully done Jugsy. |
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| Author: | Prymalrage [ Fri Dec 05, 2008 7:42 am ] |
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Tomb of the Unknowns White marble; guarded Patriots unknown; honored Warm sky rains kind tears |
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| Author: | Jugsmalone [ Fri Dec 05, 2008 8:23 am ] |
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I love your way with words Whispy,You say so very very much with so little words..truely gifted |
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| Author: | Jugsmalone [ Fri Dec 05, 2008 8:54 am ] |
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The Night before Christmas: Twas the night before Christmas When out on the floor, All the dancers were shouting give me More More More Valli with her Muffin, and Ickk with his sheep I knew in an instant there would be little sleep Oh we laughed and we Cheered, we had nothing to fear, Than Ark Hydraa showed up When he played Titties and Beer She winked and she smiled, and started to dance, than all of a sudden, Beckrowe shows up and hes not wearing pants We all followed suit, and striped to our thongs, and danced all night, to various songs Everyone, laughed and enjoyed the long night Not a single person got into a fight, and soon its was morning as we mounted the Sleigh Shouting Merry Christmas to all Thats all I can say!!! |
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| Author: | Prymalrage [ Fri Dec 05, 2008 10:35 am ] |
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LOL -- That is great. Ickk's sheep must have a little red nose and be pulling the sleigh!! |
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| Author: | bellianna [ Fri Dec 05, 2008 5:24 pm ] |
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I wrote a couple on the way home from work, kinda playful pieces and really in no way reflecting anyone I know. lol Vent I've only heard your voice but I like to imagine you Tall, graceful lines Slightly awkward stance to match your silly careless laugh. Are you, instead leaning more to the rotund rosy cheeked, with shining, mischievous eyes and an easy smile? Or does beneath your snarky and playfully teasing tone lie flashing eyes and brooding lips often turned down with the world to blame? Untitled Have you noticed her scent carries across so much further, crisper, in the winter? How it flows across the snow in cool waves before it catches at our noses with long delicate fingers while we sniff and sniff again. What is that smell? Can you smell it too? That tickle, that tease, that lightly foreign feminine scent, above the watery smell of snow. |
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| Author: | bellianna [ Fri Dec 05, 2008 5:36 pm ] |
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another, less recent, that I dug out that I didn't dislike. Unbound I took a step out of my comfort zone I laid myself out whole I opened myself up to new views and let it be known. I found myself alone. Its hard to change ingrown views beliefs I've held close and dear I bent, I flexed, I felt fractures emerge I found myself alone. I slowly unravel, and wind myself up again. New colors, newly shaped, and open. I'm alone. Yet unafraid. |
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| Author: | Prymalrage [ Fri Dec 05, 2008 7:38 pm ] |
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These are great Bell. I really like the last one. |
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| Author: | Audrins [ Sat Dec 06, 2008 12:27 am ] |
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LOL Jugs, Loved the "Night Before Christmas" spinoff! Whisper, you definitely have a way with words. Belliana, I like your style with poetry and you've made me want to put some of my more personal ones up
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| Author: | Audrins [ Sat Dec 06, 2008 12:35 am ] |
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The Forgiver This Resentment Rash Restraint Unknown Freedoms Behind The Curtain This thunderstruck paradox Why Me's? Can't he see? And Where to lead But a dark valley A suppression Lost to subconcious But lingering On the tip Watch out here he comes Ready to fight But doesn't realize Blinded by buried tears And the years creep on At an explosive peak Once again on the floor He sees partly an answer Now the blind opens On a shining morn This new found freedom The Forgiver 2003 |
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| Author: | Jugsmalone [ Sat Dec 06, 2008 2:58 am ] |
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OmG, Audri, Bell , so nice...I love the depth of theese...and I can see so much in the words.. |
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| Author: | Prymalrage [ Sat Dec 06, 2008 3:11 am ] |
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Wonderful peice Audri. I like a lot
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| Author: | Prymalrage [ Sat Dec 06, 2008 7:31 am ] |
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Poems and Me I don’t write poems all the time, I have to wait for images to come to mind. Looking at pictures on the net, For something that touches me then I will be set. Sometimes looking to sky or field, I am touched by a vision that is most surreal. I describe it the best way I can, Mind seemingly moved by another’s helping hand. Peoples faces I try to read, I see love there and hate but I mostly see need. With words I try to lightly sketch, The ones I have seen that touched me more than the rest. Hehe – take THAT Justin Hayward |
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