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Ardi hon that was very nice indeed, please do more. :smile:


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Demons:

Were you unwanted
Were you unloved
Was it lack of money
Was it lack of faith
Were you to Fat
or Maybe too thin

The demons come to you they won't let you Win

They come in a bottle
They come in the powder
they come in the needle you shoot into your arm
You may Lie, You may Cheat

The demons you try and try to Beat

So you judge me, on my size
By those dark circles under my eyes
You snicker you laugh and you stare
You have no idea of My demons
Nor do you care

I am weak, I think I can not win
The Demons they haunt me from within
You can not help me, tho you may try
I will somehow alway have an alibi

Theese Demons are mine,
and maybe in time, just a little more time
I will see how to slay theese Demons of Mine


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Beautifully done Jugsy.

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Tomb of the Unknowns

White marble; guarded
Patriots unknown; honored
Warm sky rains kind tears

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I love your way with words Whispy,You say so very very much with so little words..truely gifted


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The Night before Christmas:

Twas the night before Christmas
When out on the floor,
All the dancers were shouting
give me More More More

Valli with her Muffin, and Ickk with his sheep
I knew in an instant there would be little sleep

Oh we laughed and we Cheered,
we had nothing to fear,
Than Ark Hydraa showed up
When he played Titties and Beer

She winked and she smiled,
and started to dance, than
all of a sudden, Beckrowe shows up
and hes not wearing pants

We all followed suit, and
striped to our thongs, and
danced all night, to various songs

Everyone, laughed and enjoyed the long night
Not a single person got into a fight,
and soon its was morning as we mounted the Sleigh
Shouting Merry Christmas to all
Thats all I can say!!!


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LOL -- That is great. Ickk's sheep must have a little red nose and be pulling the sleigh!!

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I wrote a couple on the way home from work, kinda playful pieces and really in no way reflecting anyone I know. lol

Vent
I've only heard your voice
but I like to imagine you

Tall, graceful lines
Slightly awkward stance
to match your silly
careless laugh.

Are you, instead leaning
more to the rotund
rosy cheeked, with
shining, mischievous eyes
and an easy smile?

Or does beneath
your snarky and playfully teasing tone
lie flashing eyes and brooding lips
often turned down
with the world to blame?




Untitled

Have you noticed her
scent carries across so much further,
crisper,
in the winter?
How it flows across the snow in cool waves
before it catches at our noses
with long delicate fingers
while we sniff and sniff again.
What is that smell?
Can you smell it too?
That tickle, that tease,
that lightly foreign feminine scent,
above the watery smell of snow.


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another, less recent, that I dug out that I didn't dislike.

Unbound

I took a step out of my comfort zone
I laid myself out whole
I opened myself up to new views
and let it be known.

I found myself alone.

Its hard to change ingrown views
beliefs I've held close and dear
I bent, I flexed, I felt fractures emerge

I found myself alone.

I slowly unravel,
and wind myself up again.
New colors,
newly shaped,
and open.

I'm alone.
Yet unafraid.


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These are great Bell. I really like the last one.

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LOL Jugs, Loved the "Night Before Christmas" spinoff! Whisper, you definitely have a way with words. Belliana, I like your style with poetry and you've made me want to put some of my more personal ones up :)


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The Forgiver

This Resentment
Rash Restraint
Unknown Freedoms
Behind The Curtain

This thunderstruck paradox
Why Me's? Can't he see?
And Where to lead
But a dark valley

A suppression
Lost to subconcious
But lingering
On the tip

Watch out here he comes
Ready to fight
But doesn't realize
Blinded by buried tears

And the years creep on
At an explosive peak
Once again on the floor
He sees partly an answer

Now the blind opens
On a shining morn
This new found freedom
The Forgiver

2003


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OmG, Audri, Bell , so nice...I love the depth of theese...and I can see so much in the words..


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Wonderful peice Audri. I like a lot :)

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Poems and Me

I don’t write poems all the time,
I have to wait for images to come to mind.
Looking at pictures on the net,
For something that touches me then I will be set.

Sometimes looking to sky or field,
I am touched by a vision that is most surreal.
I describe it the best way I can,
Mind seemingly moved by another’s helping hand.

Peoples faces I try to read,
I see love there and hate but I mostly see need.
With words I try to lightly sketch,
The ones I have seen that touched me more than the rest.

Hehe – take THAT Justin Hayward

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